First day at the front

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First day at the front

Unread post by J5_Fritz Fugger » 19 Dec 2012, 15:47

Motivated by Matthias movie script I have written a short story about how a first day at the new front unit for a newbee could be. As you know my english isn`t perfect I wrote it in german first and translated it in english later.
So the first part is in english and the second in german, but it`s basically the same text. Should someone have some time and desire to adjust my bad english, pls let me know. I will send you the raw text in a MS Word File, whre it could be adjusted.

Have fun reading it.
http://finch.bplaced.net/story/Der%20er ... 0Front.pdf

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Unread post by J5_Bäumer » 21 Dec 2012, 02:07

Very nice read, Fugger, except that it was 5 days grounding, not 3. I'd never let someone off that easy! I can't have you creating the impression that I've gone soft or something like that. I leave the tenderhearted, velvet gloved, touchy-feely things to people like Sturm and Vorlander, to be sure! :wink:
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Unread post by J5_Vorlander » 21 Dec 2012, 04:08

Herr Fritz,

15 pages to read? Can't you make it into a movie? I have ADD (attention deficit disorder).

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Unread post by J5_Fritz Fugger » 22 Dec 2012, 16:26

@ Bäumer

I knew you are a tough guy but I didn`t realize how much - up to now.

@ Vorlander

It`s actually just 8 pages to read. Half of the text is the same in german. Maybe you need an audio book?

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Unread post by J5_Vorlander » 22 Dec 2012, 16:50

Wow, audio book!

Pls send the link.

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Unread post by J5_Bäumer » 22 Dec 2012, 20:20

Vorlander, you can't read through beer glasses. They make you see "double"...obviously the problem here!
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Unread post by Lehmann » 11 Jun 2020, 18:19

I want to take part too there! :)


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